Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Dear....

Here goes my second composition in English:

Life looks so beautiful when you are with me
Everything seems so perfect when it is just you n me
I feel like an angel when you hold me
So, tell me dear how could I let you go away from me?


12 comments:

Rat said...

Waah !
Hope the 'dear' reads this too :P

Meeta Jain said...

:)Thanks u

Prashant Kulli said...

Nice poem.. who is "Dear".... ;-)

Meeta Jain said...

@kulli:
Good question..will try 2 find out..wil let u know once i get 2 know:D

Unknown said...

Nice translation of 'Hum Tum' (Sep 30)... :)

Meeta Jain said...

@realizer:
Thanks again :)

Broken said...

it was nice... but dont give me competition :P

Meeta Jain said...

@chandy:
I am sorry for being a competitor..mujhe maaf kar dena mere dost :D

niki said...

'he' is 'the one' who comes to your mind everyday :)

Meeta Jain said...

niki:
:-)

Bhavin P Shah said...

Yeh kuch alag tha. Kiske liye likha hai? Ab bata bhi do..
Mein kisiko nahi bataunga :P

Meeta Jain said...

@Bhavin:
Yeh mere rajkumar ke liye tha :D